Please help!!! How does my poem sound like and how can i make it better

Musso asked Oct 27, 2023

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Please help!!!

How does my poem sound like and how can i make it better

Musso asked Oct 27, 2023

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I love it it also sounds so sad and serious

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Vahid Al answered Oct 31, 2023

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