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Can someone proofread and tell me any suggestions keep it 7thgrade style please.

Can someone proofread and tell me any suggestions keep it 7thgrade style please.-example-1
Can someone proofread and tell me any suggestions keep it 7thgrade style please.-example-1
Can someone proofread and tell me any suggestions keep it 7thgrade style please.-example-2
Can someone proofread and tell me any suggestions keep it 7thgrade style please.-example-3

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Yes the answer is very good congratulations
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Answer: I think it looks good

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