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Correct the following command splices (there are three in total to answer, please add more spaces between each question if you need to) I wanted to play sports since I like to play soccer a lot, I was a year away

from graduating from high school to start university and I was very happy
about it when my dad decided to bring me to the United States, I joined the
soccer team at my high school and it helped me feel not so lonely and
strange, because I had people to talk to and have fun with, it helped me a lot,
honestly.

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The subject of this question is English and the grade level is High School. The student is asking for help in correcting sentence splices in a paragraph.


Step-by-step explanation:

The subject of this question is English and the grade level is High School. The student is asking for help in correcting sentence splices in a paragraph.

A sentence splice occurs when two independent clauses are incorrectly joined together without proper punctuation or coordination. The three sentence splices in the paragraph are:

  • 'I wanted to play sports since I like to play soccer a lot, I was a year away from graduating from high school to start university and I was very happy about it when my dad decided to bring me to the United States.'
  • 'I joined the soccer team at my high school and it helped me feel not so lonely and strange, because I had people to talk to and have fun with, it helped me a lot, honestly.'

To correct these sentence splices, the student can use conjunctions such as 'and' or 'but,' add semicolons, or break the sentences into separate clauses or sentences using proper punctuation.


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