Question

REVISE THE PARAGRAPH . COMBINE SENTENCES TO PRESERVE SYNTAX Saturday , October 14, I woke up to a nice sunny morning . The birds were chirping , bees humming . The sky became overcast . There was a shadow . I wondered what was going on. I checked the time . I realized oh its time for solar eclipse . I was about to look up . I remmebered the message from my teacher to not view the sun direct . I went in to get my eclipse glasses . I saw that ring of fire . It was a great experience

Answer 1

On Saturday, October 14, I woke up to a sunny morning with birds chirping and bees humming. However, as the sky grew overcast and a shadow loomed, I realized it was time for a solar eclipse. Remembering my teacher's warning, I quickly fetched my eclipse glasses before looking up. Witnessing the ring of fire was an incredible experience.