Final answer:
The question pertains to an English grammar issue where a pronoun, 'he', does not clearly refer to either of two possible antecedents, 'Paul' and 'Julio'. In the original sentence, it's unclear who hit their head. Clarity can be improved by specifying who 'he' refers to.
Step-by-step explanation:
The narrative describes an incident involving Paul and Julio, two characters who have returned from a journey along the Appalachian Trail. In the sentence, 'Paul and Julio had just returned from a long and exhausting hike along the Appalachian Trail when he stumbled and hit his head', it is not clearly indicated who the pronoun 'he' refers to. It could be either Paul or Julio.
Given that 'he' is a singular pronoun, it cannot refer to both individuals simultaneously. This indicates a lack of clarity in the writing.
To fix this sentence, it should either specify whether Paul or Julio hit their head, or a correct singular antecedent should precede the use of 'he'. For example, 'Paul had just returned from a long and exhausting hike along the Appalachian Trail with Julio when he stumbled and hit his head'. This makes it clear that it was Paul who hit his head.
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