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This is my Rhetorical Analysis Essay for my English class. I am not the best at writing essays so I need some to proof read my essay. I know that my body paragraphs need the most help. Please DO NOT tell me that my essay is fine because my teacher told me if I turn it in like this I would get a C. Only answer if you can help me better improve my essay. This essay is on Madeleine Albright 1897 commencement speech, you can read it online if you need more backround information. Also my conclusion is not done I wrote the questions my teacher wanted us to answer. If you read the speech and my essay please let me know what I can add or fix.

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You did not add your essay so I cannot proofread it; please add it, and I will make comments/suggestions.

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