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Read the paragraph.

Even though my life is very busy, I spend as much time
as I can with my family. I often ask my dad, who is an
excellent athlete to play soccer with me. I also enjoy
taking walks, baking desserts, and playing cards with
my mom. However, nothing is better than watching
movies with my loyal cat, Max
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How should this paragraph be revised so that it is
correct?
The word "soccer should be capitalized
O Insert a comma after "cards"
O The word "cat" should be capitalized.
O Insert a comma after "athlete"
Please help :(

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Answer:Insert a comma after "athlete"

Explanation: I took the test

User AaronLS
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Insert a comma after "athlete"

I often ask my dad, who is an

excellent athlete, to play soccer with me.

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