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Dear Principal Smithons,

Exercise is good for a person's body. When I get home, I immediately start working on my mounds of homework. I would rather be outside playing basketball with my friends. However, I have to make homework a priority. I often don't finish my assignments until nightfall. By then, it's too late to go outside. I know that I don't get nearly enough exercise with just having P.E. three days a week.
According to the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC), childhood obesity rates have tripled in adolescents aged 12–19 in the past 30 years. In California alone, 38% of students are overweight. Youth who are obese are more likely to have heart-related health risks and to develop diabetes. According to the CDC, schools are important in creating safe and supportive environments with rules and expectations that foster healthy behaviors. Our school can make a positive impact on the health of students by having P.E. classes every weekday so that students have the opportunity to improve their health.
If most of the students are like me, they rarely have time to get outside after school to exercise. Please consider adding two more days of P.E. classes to our class schedules.

Sincerely,

Mack McQueen
8th grade student

Which set of sentences goes best at the beginning of the introductory paragraph?
A.
At Finley Junior High, we go to physical education classes just three days a week. However, I feel that we should have P.E. classes five days a week.
B.
Plenty of physical activity can lower a person's risk of becoming overweight. Schools can teach students about healthy physical activity behaviors.
C.
The CDC recommends that schools offer daily physical education programs. This can easily be done by increasing the hours students are at school.
D.
Overweight is defined as having too much body weight for a certain height. A person becomes overweight by consuming more calories than are used.

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A. At Finley Junior High, we go to physical education classes just three days a week. However, I feel that we should have P.E. classes five days a week.

Step-by-step explanation:

The other options do not contain a thesis. Without a thesis, the principal has no idea what you'd even like to have happen.

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