Question

Which revision improves the professional tone of the

text?
O Change sentence 1 to: "Cleaning up garbage in the
ocean would be way better for the environment.'
Change sentence 2 to: "A company called the
Ocean Cleanup Project has cleaned up a ton of
ocean garbage."
Change sentence 4 to: "The system consists of a
big screen below it that catches the stuff."
Change sentence 5 to: "Implementing several of
these systems could remove garbage from the
oceans."

Answer 1

Change sentence 5 to improve the professional tone

Step-by-step explanation:

Sentence 1 uses the phrasing "would be way better," which does not sound professional.

Sentence 2 uses the phrasing "cleaned up a ton," because it is not referring to a literal ton, it is also not professional.

Sentence 4 uses the phrasing "the stuff," not professional.

Answer 2

a

Step-by-step explanation: