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Make this sentence more interesting:
I am swinging.

User RChugunov
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I am swinging over a boiling pit, while Godzilla destroys the planet
User GreyRoofPigeon
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Okay, so to make this sentence more interesting we have to add more detail. Watch:
Before:
I am swinging.
After:
I am swinging on my big green porch swing with fluffy cushions, listening to the birds chirping and letting the sun hit my face and warm my entire body as I lean my head back and take a deep breath of air that smells of flowers and fresh cut grass.
Does that make sense?
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