Excerpt from Emily Dickinson
Carole Jenkins
During her lifetime, she published only seven of her poems, and she published those anonymously.
Look at the portion of the passage number (7). In an effort to make the passage more concise, which would be the BEST revision of
the sentence?
During her lifetime, she published only seven of her poems, and she published those anonymously.
A)
She published only seven anonymous poems during her lifetime.
B)
During her anonymous lifetime, she published only seven of her poems.
During her lifetime, she anonymously published only seven of her poems.
D)
During her lifetime, she published only seven of her poems anonymously.