Question

Which statement should be revised for a more formal tone?

A.) Artemis wasn’t great to have around because she’s the one who brought death and disease everywhere.
B.) Artemis and Apollo, her twin brother, were armed with bows, quivers, and arrows in battle.
C.) Artemis never fell in love and remained unmarried, remaining a symbol of purity and holiness.
D.) Artemis was considered the goddess of wild animals, hunting, and the natural world.

Answer 1

Question A should be revised because it contains contractions.

Answer 2

“Artemis wasn't great to have around because she's the one who brought death and disease everywhere” should be revised for a more formal tone. Artemis was the daughter of Leto and Zeus, and the twin of Apollo. She is the goddess of the wilderness, the hunt and wild animals, and fertility. She is the helpers of midwives as a goddess of birth. In one legend, Artemis was born one day before her brother Apollo. The correct answer between all the choices given is the first choice or letter A. I am hoping that this answer has satisfied your query and it will be able to help you in your endeavor, and if you would like, feel free to ask another question.