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Which revision best corrects the errors in the given sentence?

There are certain things about winter for instance, hot soup and the first snowfall that I always enjoy.

A.There are certain things about winter: for instance, hot soup and the first snowfall—that I always enjoy.

B.There are certain things about winter: for instance, hot soup and the first snowfall that I always enjoy.

C.There are certain things about winter—for instance, hot soup and the first snowfall—that I always enjoy.

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The right answer for the question that is being asked and shown above is that: "B.There are certain things about winter: for instance, hot soup and the first snowfall that I always enjoy." This is the revision that best corrects the errors in the given sentence
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