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Halloween has come and gone; however many kids still have lots of sugar in them

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The punctuation for this sentence is incorrect. Since you are attempting to combine two independent clauses with a conjuctive adverb (however). The correct way to punctuate this sentence is:
"Halloween has come and gone; however, many kids still have lots of sugar in them."

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