Question

Personal Statement

Please include a personal statement about why you are applying and what you feel you can contribute to the program. Your statement should be a minimum of 500 words and include the following information: Why would you like to attend this Oxbridge program? Please tell us about your academic and extracurricular interests. Be sure to include your current, unweighted grade point average (GPA) or your school's equivalent. What interests you about the Major and/or Minor/Workshop courses you intend to pursue? What do you feel you will contribute to the program? Feel free to share any additional details that you feel may help our Admissions Team understand why you are a good fit for this program. so can someone help me cause I'm not sure how to write this on a way that is convincing​

Answer 1

Why I would like to attend this Oxbridge program is simple, really however let me answer other things first. I enjoy the Workshop and stained glass classes I have been exposed too. My GPA is 3.7 in my current school. But it has been going through my family and I want to make them proud, It is something I have been interested in and enjoyed learning about. However your program is the perfect to extend my knowledge and help me expand my horizons. In my future I see myself doing this. This school hands down has one of the best programs out their.

I see that this is a competative program and that you expect the best, and I am the best. I play hard but work way harder.