Question

Which sentence should be rewritten to improve the clarity of the paragraph?

Driving to the fair was a troublesome, difficult situation today. We planned on leaving at 5:30 p.m., which was unfortunately during rush hour. The traffic would be horrible and we did not want to be stuck. We decided to consult a map in an attempt to find an alternative route.
A. Sentence 1, B. 2nd Sentence, C. 3rd Sentence, D. 4th Sentence

Answer 1

A. Sentence 1

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Answer 2

To improve the clarity of the paragraph above, SENTENCE 1 should be re-written. The structure of the sentence and the choice of words should be reconsider. A simple sentence can be used to express the fact that if was difficult driving to the fair on that day. For instance, the sentence could read:

Driving to the fair today was a challenging experience.