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AllegedlyrecoveredfromthelegendaryKingSolomon’s Mines, the uncut,roughstonewasacquiredin1544bythescandalousDeLucafamily.Gifted as partofadowryin1612, the fate of the diamond, along with several other high profile gems, was unknown after the Franco-Spanishwarof 1635, before it mysteriously reappearance over three centuries later.

Sold lastyeartotheMorettiBrothersjewellersforjustover£22million, neither time nor conflict had dimmed its brilliance.Indeed, the twin-eighty-year-old brothers suggest that the value of the now cut and polished 90-carat diamond has already increased by at least 50%. It will be on display for four weeks only.

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Allegedly recovered from the legendary King Solomon's Mines, the uncut, rough stone was acquired in 1544 by the scandalous DeLuca family. Gifted as part of a dowry in 1612, the fate of the diamond, along with several other high profile gems, was unknown after the Franco-Spanishwarof 1635, before it mysteriously reappearance over three centuries later.

Sold last year to the Moretti Brothers jewelers for just over £22 million, neither time nor conflict has dimmed its brilliance. Indeed, the twin-eighty-year-old brothers suggest that the value of the now cut and polished 90-carat diamond has already increased by at least 50%. It will be on display for four weeks only.
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