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Which thesis statement is better? Although both are elephants, Asian and African elephants are quite different. Although both are elephants, Asian and African elephants are different in size, genetics, and habitat.

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The answer is Although both are elephants, Asian and African elephants are different in size, genetics, and habitat!

This one is more specific.

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I would go with although both elephants,Asian and African elephants ate different in size ,genetics and habitat
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