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If a teacher writes that the paper lacks transitions, the writer needs to work on ?

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Depending on what you are writing
If it is a story, you are jumping around too much in it and no logical ordering to it, so you would need to find a way to make it work together like in chronologically or another form.

Or if it is a research paper you do not tell when you change topics, try using words like "After All" "Next" "For this reason" "on the other hand"
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transition words  would need to be worked on
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