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I need help coming up a title for this poem? Can I have idas?

My love for you is so strong
I can't deny it.
Everyone knows how much I want your love.
But they laugh and throw unkind words
Like a child throwing stones at a dove.
No one knows how much it gives me pain
My happiness and love is in a box locked with a chan
What's up with me that makes people hate?
I guess I just have a bad fate.
You don't see the way I look at you.
Even though you left me alone,
My love just grew and grew.
Even though I smile
No one stops by and so I just wait a while.
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
Why don't you see how much I really love you.
You fix your eyes upon another girl
And your brain takes a twirl
And you never look at me how you look at her!
We used to talk and get in trouble
But I never cared because we were always together.
We walked to class together
When I was with you,
My life felt light as a feather.
I hope you soon understand
That when I'm with you,
I'm always happy and never blue.

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What about everlasting love ?
User Isaac Overacker
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How about Love For Another?
User Tobias Lorenz
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