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Read the paragraph.

(1) Equal funding should be provided for girls’ and boys’ sports. (2) Many girls participate in sports. (3) Individual sports have more long-term benefits than team sports. (4) Participation in sports benefits girls and boys. (5) Federal law prohibits gender discrimination in school athletics.

How would eliminating sentence 3 improve the paragraph

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it would better improve the paragraph because it has nothin to do with the rest of the paragraph. The paragraph seems to be about team sports and promoting it, while sentence 3 is about individual sports are better then team sports. So removing sentence three would better promote CO-ED team sports.
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