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Can you give me some sentences for my scary camping trip

Can you give me some sentences for my scary camping trip-example-1
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That night I went to sleep thinking it would all be over soon, I woke up to hearing rustling outside of my tent. I got curious so I got out of my tent and walked around for a few minutes.. I was starting to get weird feelings about this place even weirder than before and all of the sudden the trees started shaking, but there was no breeze.. then I started feeling breathing on my neck. I turned around to find that it was a deer, I calmed a little bit but then I saw that the deers eyes were red and bloody and behind the deer there was more dead animals but.. these animals were just killed maybe a few minutes ago..
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Then i looked back to find mum staring at the dead animals and blood and i knew for sure this trip was cancelled. Even dad could see the look on mum's face and iknew they were going to fight.

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