Question

Thesis

Do you think kids should be able to bring their cellphones to school? Well in New York City, they are going to reverse the ban of students having their cell phones in school. The ban was implied by the Bloomberg administration in 2006 but, Mayor Bill De Blasio defended the policy change, thinking that it was important for kids to easily contact their parents. Do you think more counties will do the same?

thesis question; Do you think more counties will do the same?

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Answer 1

This is how I would write your thesis. "Should kids be allow to bring their cellphones to school? I believed they should, because it's necessary for kids to be able to communicate with their parents in case of an emergency. In New York City, their policy of banned cellular devices will be reversed and students will be allow to use their devices freely. However, will other counties like New York city be as open minded and allowed the usage of cellphones?"