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How is this quote too formal? please help ASAP, thank you

“It was indubitably the case that our team was successful in presenting a proposal that was characterized by quality of the highest order. My appreciation for your industriousness is herewith extended.”

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Theres no such thing as to formal

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Answer:

yes

Step-by-step explanation:

words like proposal and industriousness make it seem formal

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