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To whom it may concern: I am interested in the job I saw postd in the lunchroom at Jefferson high school. I’ve babysat neighborhood children a couple of times and I think it’d be fun to work in a preschool. Children seem to like me and I don’t mind hanging out with them. It’s pretty easy to keep them amused. I know that working at the preschool will be different than being in someones house, but I think I can handle it. I learn quickly and am pretty flexible about most things. I’m looking forward to talking to you about this position. I can’t start until after the holidays, but I can work any afternoon except Fridays. Thanks! Lisa Sullay Evaluate the tone of this cover letter. Is it appropriate?

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Yes she did !!!!!!!!
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yes, because she wrote a semi- formal job interview letter
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