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HELP PLEASE AND QUICK PLEASEEWhich choice avoids fragments to present the information clearly and correctly?

1. Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success because of his teenage daughter's computer skills. His website received a ton of donations. People loved it. Her sleek design and funny videos. It attracted a large crowd.

2.Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success because of his teenage daughter's computer skills. His website received a ton of donations. People loved her sleek design and funny videos. Attracting a large crowd.

3. Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success. Because of his teenage daughter's computer skills. His website received a ton of donations. People loved it. The sleek design and funny videos attracted a large crowd.

4. Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success. Because of his teenage daughter's computer skills, his website received a ton of donations. People loved it. Her sleek design and funny videos attracted a large crowd.

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I'm going to say 2 because in the other answers it looks like it has a fragment it says :People loved it: I may be wrong though.
User Himanshu Bhandari
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I would say 4, it seems a lot clearer than the other answers to me.
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