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Your English teacher has asked you to write a story. Your story must begin with this sentence:

As soon as she walked into her room, Susanna knew that something was wrong.

Your story must include:
- a necklace
- a misunderstanding
Write your story (140 - 190 words)

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As soon as she walked into her room, Susanna knew something was wrong. The necklace around her neck became noticeably warm, radiating heat onto her chest. She wondered with frustration what she doing here. Susanna had agreed with this girl 3 years earlier to not associate with eachother until she became an adult.

“What in the world are you doing here?” she asked in a hushed voice as she scanned the room to see where she could be hinding. The necklace glowing with warmth was her sign of knowing she was close, as she was given the necklace by this mystery girl, who says she’s the last of her kind, that radiates with magic. She was strange, she certainly would seem humanoid, but had dark purple eyes and radiated a sense of uncanny valley. Sure enough, as soon as she sees a shoulder she instantly feels the effect. But when Susanna grabs the shoulder and bends around the corner, it was not her.
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