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Which revision would be the BEST improvement of this sentence from paragraph 2? A) Transportation by a raft is a symbolic role in the evolution of local history of transportation. B) The transportation by a raft as a role of traveling is symbolic of the evolution of local history. C) The raft is a fitting symbol of the role that transportation has played in the evolution of local history. Eliminate D) The transportation by a symbolic raft, which represents the role of transportation, in the evolution of local history.

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Yeah its C, read it a little more carefully and look at the answers and you should see it.

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I believe if the answer to "Which revision would be the BEST improvement of this sentence from paragraph 2?" can't be "D. The transportation by a symbolic raft, which represents the role of transportation, in the evolution of local history." because it is eliminated so it would be ...... "C. The raft is a fitting symbol of the role that transportation has played in the evolution of local history."

I say that "C" is the answer because it is the one to be more informational and is true.

A. Transportation by a raft is a symbolic role in the evolution of local history of transportation.

B. The transportation by a raft as a role of traveling is symbolic of the evolution of local history.

C. The raft is a fitting symbol of the role that transportation has played in the evolution of local history.

D. The transportation by a symbolic raft, which represents the role of transportation, in the evolution of local history.

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