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Employees who work for this company and are working for this company in this building should obey their supervisor and park their cars on the second level of the parking garage. What is the most concise and accurate way to revise this sentence? A) Employees should park their cars. B) Employees working in this building should park their cars on the second level of the parking garage. C) Employees working on the second level should park their cars on the second level parking garage if you are an employee who works in this building. D) Employees should obey their supervisor and park their cars on the second level of the parking garage if they wish to remain employed as an employee in this building.

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C) would be the bet way to recite the sentence.

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its (B) Employees working in this building should park their cars on the second level of the parking garage.

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