Question

Using the best thesis statement listed below to compose an outline with three major supporting details and two minor supporting details for each major supporting detail.

Time Management will give you the opportunity to have a noncomplicated in your life, focusing on what you want. After a good sleep, because you had no worries of yesterday’s duties, you start your day with vitality. You go to the gym to exercise and dedicate just the exact time to keep on with your daily schedule. Because you have set goals for your week, you respect the time frames for each activity and that is why you are not in a hurry. You will have enough time to do homework, eat, meditate and watch TV. Planning is a very important part to remember your goal every day. That is why you do not have to memorize anything because you can check your goals in writing. You have your plan written and you follow it. When you have the necessity, you can add some reminders to keep on with the goals' accomplishment. Through the day, you will be thinking about your goals.

Answer 1

A thesis statement should tell the reader what the paper is about and also help guide the writing and keep the argument focused. In this paragraph, the best thesis statement is, "Time Management will give you the opportunity to have a non-complicated in your life, focusing on your life."

Thesis: "Time Management will give you the opportunity to have a non-complicated in your life, focusing on your life."

1. No worries

• Get a good night's sleep
• Start the day with vitality

2. Have set goals

• daily schedule- respect time frames for each activity
• not in a hurry

3. Planning

• Can check your goals in writing
• Able to add reminders to keep on with the goals' accomplishment

The paragraph is short, so the main points made are the three major supporting details. Then, using additional points from the paragraph, you can find minor supporting detail for each major supporting detail. The answer could vary slightly depending on one's interpretation of what is the most important in the paragraph, but generally these are the main ideas.

Note: I believe there may be a word missing in the thesis or the first sentence of the paragraph, after non-complicated and before in.