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I need help starting an essay is this good or not?

Throughout time and history, women have been always seen as the lesser counterpart.

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yes

Step-by-step explanation:

Make sure to back it up with supporting details. that can be varied as facts, but make sure to keep it in your own words not just coping.

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Is this your thesis or your opening statement? If it’s an opening statement, it’s a very good hook to pique the reader’s interest. If it’s a thesis, you need some more structure and evidence to back it up.

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