Question

Hi, i need help ASAP I was wondering if this is a good introduction for an argument essay

Topic: Are highschool sports beneficial or harmful to students

Side I chose: highschool sports is beneficial


Is their a claim, hook and intro??

Should I add something??

Thank u so much!!

Answer 1

It's a great start, but your conclusion sentence may need a little tweak. Try to focus on why the sport is beneficial to the problems you've stated.

Good luck!