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Can some one help with my argumentative essay? It is about if money can but happiness or not. It is do tomorrow 8th period. So far I wrote:

Some people say that money can buy happiness, and others say it can't. People who think money can’t buy happiness may dispies you for having lots of money. However money can buy happiness if you spend it the right way.Science studies prove that happiness levels increase with income up to roughly $75,000 in annual salary.

People say happiness is from inside not the outside.

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what do you need help with that's a good start so far
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Since it is for English class I assume. You might want to fix “dispies” to “despise”
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