"Wake Up" passionately urges for mindfulness, cautioning against the dangers of excessive technology use and the loss of precious moments.
Your spoken word piece "Wake Up" hits powerfully with its message about the pitfalls of being constantly engrossed in technology. The urgency and warning conveyed about losing precious moments to screens and devices come through strongly.
The piece effectively uses imagery of consequences and regrets to drive home the impact of being detached from the present. The repetitions of "Wake up" serve as a poignant reminder throughout the piece.
Consider refining the formatting and grammar for clarity, but overall, the raw emotion and sincerity behind the message resonate powerfully. Great work!