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Which version of this sentence creates the MOST vivid image?

The sun burned scarlet as her and I strolled through Central Park.
The sun became more red as her and I walked through the park.
The sun was slowly setting as we walked through the park.
The sun turned a different color as we walked through the park.

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"The sun burned scarlet as her and i strolled through Central park." This is the most vivid answer out of the rest. It uses great IMAGERY because of the detail and use of words. Instead of it just being a red sun, it is a sun that "burned scarlet". Hope this helped! <3
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