125k views
3 votes
Read the sentence from a sample cover letter.

Because I have four years of experience, have earned
exemplary reviews from previous jobs, and am incredibly
intelligent. I am certain that I will become a high-ranking
manager in no time.
What is the weakness in this sentence?

2 Answers

6 votes

Answer:

He/She starts with because Instead of sayinng I have four years of exprerience. HE/SHE also says that they are incredibly smart if you are smart you don't have to say it you'll show it

Step-by-step explanation:

User Statler
by
5.2k points
4 votes

Answer:it over states the candidate qualification

Step-by-step explanation:

User PLui
by
5.5k points