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Ravi Ross can't wait for the first day of school he wants to show everyone his new shoes.

Does this sentence need any punctuation?

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Answer:

Ravi Ross can't wait for the first day of school! He wants to show everyone his new shoes.

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User Farrell
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It does.

Step-by-step explanation:

The correct sentence would be: Ravi Ross can't wait for the first day of school; he wants to show everyone his new shoes.

Of course, you could separate the sentences with a period instead of a semi colon, but a semi colon makes it run smoother. Also, if you add a period, there would be two sentences instead of one.

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