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Why does Luka need to revise his thesis statement?

It is missing a clear topic.
It contains the wrong tone.
It is missing a clear viewpoint.
It contains grammatical errors

User Eric Cope
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Number three is the answer to your question
User Kalugny
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Number 3, missing a clear viewpoint.
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