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Our football coach gathered us together and told us to run laps, and then he made us lift weights, and then he said we had a scrimmage. Which revision corrects the faulty coordination in the sentence?

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Answer:

Our football coach gathered us together and told us to run laps, lift weights, and scrimmage.

Step-by-step explanation:

Keep the continuation of the sentence simple yet effective.

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