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PLZ HELP!!!!!!!! I'm writing an argumentative Essay on Abortion for my English class but my teacher said that my hook and thesis statement don't match. How can I make them match?

Thesis/hook:
Say NO to Abortions; Even though abortions are legal in the United States, I feel they should be illegal because killing a child is wrong and can also cause medical problems for the mother.

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Should people say yes or no to abortions? People should say no because... then you would put you three supporting details after that sentence.

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