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When revising an essay, you should make sure your examples and details are engaging and humorous to a general audience. Relevant and relate back to the topic sentence. Based on opinions and views that most people share. Focused on your own personal experience.

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B - relevant and relate back to the topic sentence.

If examples and details in an essary aren't relevant or relate to the topic - cut them out or it will lead to confusion by the reader.

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Answer:

When revising an essay, you should make sure your examples and details are Relevant and relate back to the topic sentence.

Step-by-step explanation:

Examples in an essay have the objective of giving supporting details that prove the topic sentence, then the information in them should be reliable and real, besides being unbiased and related and relevant to the main topic, if a person does not follow these parameters to add examples then is not supporting their original idea in the essay.

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