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An example for an intruduction paragraph

im soo stupid :*(

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this is my own storie by the way :)

The earthquake was something nobody was prepared for, my family and I were lucky to survive but it could have been a whole different story. So me and my family we lived in the mountains in Kenscoff a little bit out of the capital. where everything was awesome my mom was and still is an artist, back then she used to paint on jewelry, clothing etc.



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well you could start off with an interesting hook!
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