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Can someone please check this? Give me some feedback too. I did do a cited page but i didn’t post it. Can you please check the rest though and make sure I have ALL the requirements?

Can someone please check this? Give me some feedback too. I did do a cited page but-example-1
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Hi! I saw a few small typos. Be sure to check commas! Also, try cutting out 'the' in 'the society'.

Practice it aloud- you'll feel confident and will see and correct errors.
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The only problem I seen wrong with it was there was one word spelled wrong and that was basis. Other than that, everything looks fine.
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