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Rewrite the following paragraph, adding adjectives to describe the three things you’d like to buy. When I have enough money, there are three things I’d like to buy. First, I need to buy a car. Next, I want to buy a television. If I have enough money left over, I’m going to buy a lamp for my living room. Write a short paragraph with at least three sentences. Use at least four adjectives to describe someone you know or would like to know.

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Paragraph 1:

When I have enough money, there are three things I’d like to buy. First, I need to buy a bran-new car. Next, I want to buy a smart television. If I have enough money left over, I’m going to buy a reading lamp for my living room.

Paragraph 2:

My best friend is sympathetic. She is good at listening to my problems. When I speak to her, she is always attentive . Besides, she is very reliable because she always keeps secrets.

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New paragraph:

When I have plenty of money, there are three things I'd like to buy. First, I need to a buy a new luxury car. Next, I want to buy a modern television. If I have enough money left over, I'm going to buy a flower-shaped lamp for my living room.

This paragraph is about my friend Nicky. Nicky is an easy-going guy, he's very friendly and nice. Sometimes, he may be stubborn because he likes to get things done his way, but still, he is a great pal. He likes making people laugh, and that's why he memorizes many jokes.

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