Question

I just wrote this euolgy tell me if its good. Its for an Honors Projects so it needs to be poppin!!!!!!!! TBH??

Rose DuBois was a friend
as her life started it was done.
Her carmine hair was bolder than
the emitting glisten of the sun.
Not one can ponder enough to think
what a wonderful person she used to be.
When she spoke words of light,
throwing kisses instead of fights.
Troubles came across her one after the other
not one came back again
facing them like fall stopping summer.
She was incredible and very mischievous
Her smile so elated it was felicitous.
When we come to earth
we start to lose one’s life it said
“born to mourn”
is what Esham once did mention
At death we all deplore
It is bound to happen
Very natural
It was something Rose never imagined
Now it is factual.

Answer 1

I love this, I didn't find it confusing at all and it was very clear about what was happening. I'm sure your Honors class will adore it!